If i am in the story, I think I will do the
same thing as Chuck does, Chuck has the feeling that he can go back to his country.
He so brave and he don’t give up anything.
Tuesday 7 August 2012
TASK 8
Monday 6 August 2012
TASK 9
Summarry ( Lie
detector )
There
are variuos ways in which the lie
detector machine can be used ,firstly, it work by voice analysis without a
subject’s knowledge and used by private
industry for pre –employment screaming, investigating,thefts, and even periodic
staff checks.others than that ,the divide is used For pre- employment
interviews. And its is also used by
insurance investigator monitor the insurance system . The objections to its use
is it can be used to probe a whole range of personal issues and political
affiliations.
TASK 10
According to legend,there lived seven brother
(Tuluh sangkakak) in Kg Salilir who possesed supernatural strength.The youngest
brother uses reputed to be the most
outstading .It was not easy to challenge him.It wa alaso said that the people could see the brother but
could not converse with them.
The brother were liked by the
villger.Everyday,they helped the villager to flatten the hills by throwing
rocks taken from a river.It was said that they hoped to mortal after completing
the task.
The
Brother extradinary strength drew
the envy of the one Kalawon kelala.who was himself a very powerfulman.he was
particulary jeolous of the youngest brothers talent and plotted to kill him.To
do this ,he pretewted to bestfriend him.he asked to borrow his poison dart for
two days.On the third day.at an appointed place,on the pretext of returnng the
poison dart.Kalawon kelala instead uses his blowpipe with the poison dart in it
and shot at the youngest brother.The youngest brother was hit but he bravely
retailed by usisng his machectc(parang).He however,on maroged to toward to
around Kalawon Kelala’s leg and hit a nereby rock.This rock split intotwo.Seeing
that the youngest brother still had some strength left Kalawon kelala filled
for his life.
The
six older brother found their youngest brother weak and dying the
youngest brother managed to related what had happed.He also said that he feared
their task of flattering the hill might not be completed because he would
die.he then requested them to burry his body at Mt Lumaku.(near sipitang) upon
his death.
The new of the youngest brother’s death was
announced to the villager by the beating of gong three times followed by a fact
beat in this village,the gong was placed on a rock and struck repatelly and so
hard that the rock became marked. The villagers could not come into direct
contact with the brothers, thus it was left to the six brothers to carry the
body of the youngest brother to Mt. Lumaku. The funeral procession was
accompanied by gong beating until they reached the burial site.The journey to
Mt.Lumaku took two days.On the first day,the six brothers stopped to spend the
night at a place called Nahanas.As they placed the coffin on the ground,it
turned into rock.The body however,remained intact.(The villagers of Kampong
Salilir called the rock BatuNamalungunan or coffin-shaped rock.This rock can
still be seen in Nahanas today).
On the second day,the brothers took turns to
carry the body of the youngest brother.At a place called Lumuyu,they stopped to
have a rest.They saw that the place had three huge rocks.Overcome with grief at
the loss of their youngest brother,the six brothers began carving on the rocks
to release their sadness.(These rocks are called BatuBinatikan or carved rock
by the villagers.It was said that the brothers used their fingers to carve on
the rocks).After having carved them.They continued their journey to Mt.Lumaku
where they buried their youngest brother.
TASK 6
What are the
common mistakes you do in writing? Do you fine writing in English is difficult?
What kind of problem do you face when you start writing? What are your
suggestions to overcome the problem?
They are a few mistakes that I usually make when doing
and English writing. The 1st one is when using proper grammar, it
hard for me to use proper grammar such as past tense. Some time I use word that
not what I mean to use.
The 2nd
is spelling error I usually make mistake when spelling a word why cause English
pronounce and spelling have a huge different. When a topic have been given and
as an example it have particular writing format I usually don’t know how to use
this format like letter format. I would be nice to use an idiom in writing but
I don’t know how to use a particular idiom. And when I use 1 usually I will
make mistake.
Do I found English is difficult, this is a yes for me I
found English is difficult because growing using Malay as
my 1st language and English as my 2nd language make English
very hard. Seldom use English when talking makes English hard for me. Pronounce
a word in English also very hard. Cause the spelling is different with the
pronounce the word. Building a sentence in English is also hard for me to do.
Sometime when I do a sentence it lead to a different meaning. A word in English
can lead to a different meaning depending a sentence I make. That also a common
thing that make English very hard for me to do.
What is the problem that I face when I start writing?
When I start writing I must have the topic to begin with. But when the topic
got it lead me to absent minded I don’t know how to start it. Providing a
proper example is also a problem when I am writing. I can’t provide a proper
example when I do my writing. To evaluate an idea also a problem for me when
start writing. As an example love I can’t evaluate what love is.
My suggestion to overcome this problem is use English
even more. Read article in English and whit the help of dictionary find the
meaning of the word. It will help a lot not only in English knowledge it also
help me in writing. Listening to a English song also help a lot when it came to
pronounce a particular word. Find the meaning of the word. Will help in
spelling. It will surprise you how much you improve your English. Try to use
English as your daily conversation this will help a lot.
TASK 5
Water pollution
Water pollution can be
found in everywhere. We know that water is the main sources in our daily life. The reason why water
pollution is happen is the wasting of petrol and diesel, chemical industries,
sewage and east water. Float can be happen if human throwing rubbish into the
river and it also can cause water pollution. Meanwhile water pollution is
spread almost around the world. It can be bring dangerous to us. Some company
that produce drink water hard to them to analysis about water. Water pollution
can broke our sight-seeing for example tanjung lipat can be classified as water
pollution. Also water pollution can bring effect to the animal in the sea and
surrounding in the world. Way to avoid water pollution happen are when we see
any rubbish in the river or in the sea, slowly remove the rubbish and throw it
in dustbin.
TASK 4
Stages of writing process
Stages
of writing process we must have Topic Sentence, Supporting details and
Conclusion.
·
Topic Sentence is
introduction of a paragraph, and start with a topic sentence that uses the key
words. Example:
The
place that I feel most comfortable is my hometown of PulauLangkayan.
·
Supporting details is reason
that your topic is true, and three reason sentence and detail sentence. Showing
the reason, and one of these explanation, evidence, example and experience.
Example
I
can relax as I watch the surfaces gently glide over the tumbling ocean waves.
Seeing the tall palm trees sway in the wind is calming to me as I watch the
rolling sand dunes. The pier, as red as a ruby, stand out to me among the deep
blue ocean. As I lay on the sand, I see kites rise above the clouds and soar
gracefully in the wind. The fisherman cast their line off the pier hoping to
feel a tug and reel in a big fish.
The sounds
of PulauLangkayan beach are that harmony.
Seagulls peacefully chirp as they soar overhead searching for food. The howling
wind whistles through the beach like an arriving train. As the crash of the
waves thunder through my ears, it brings me back to reality while I day dream.
The sound of oil rigs across main street sound like a steady drum keeping the
beat in an orchestra of sound.
Everything
on PulauLangkayan beach has its own unique feel.
The salty air blowing on my face feels wet and cool as it passed by. The
felling of the grainy sand is comforting to my feet as I walk across the shore.
When I plunge into the ocean’s salt water, it feels refreshing to my skin like
a glass of water on a hot day.
·
Conclusion is no paragraph
should be less than eight sentences and restates introduction. Example
PulauLangkayan
Beach is my mostay comfortable place mainly because of the sights,
sounds, and the unique feel of everything mentioned in this ess. When
I’m there, I feel totally relaxed as if I were in my own little world. Most of
all, PulauLangkayan Beach is my most comfortable place because it is my
favourite place to be on earth.
TASK 3
In
your own word describe the step of “writing process” provide example of the
topic sentence, supporting sentences and concluding sentences.
In
writing step there are 3 types of sentences that we have to make that is topic,
supporting, and concluding sentence.
The
1st sentence is topic sentence what is the topic sentence? The topic sentence
is the first sentence in a paragraph. What does it do? It introduces the main idea of the paragraph.
How do I write one? Summarize the main idea of your paragraph. Indicate to the
reader what your paragraph will be about. Example:
There are three reasons why Canada is
one of the best countries in the world. First, Canada has an excellent
health care system. All Canadians have access to medical services at a
reasonable price. Second, Canada has a high standard of education. Students are
taught by well-trained teachers and are encouraged to continue studying at
university. Finally, Canada's cities are clean and efficiently managed.
Canadian cities have many parks and lots of space for people to live. As a
result, Canada is a desirable place to live
The
2nd sentence is what is supporting sentences? They come after the topic
sentence, making up the body of a paragraph. What do they do? They give details
to develop and support the main idea of the paragraph. How do I write them? You
should give supporting facts, details, and examples. Example:
There
are three reasons why Canada is one of the best countries in the world. First, Canada has an excellent health care
system. All Canadians have access to medical services at a reasonable price.
Second, Canada has a high standard of education. Students are taught by well-trained
teachers and are encouraged to continue studying at university. Finally,
Canada's cities are clean and efficiently managed. Canadian cities have many
parks and lots of space for people to live. As a result, Canada is a
desirable place to live.
The
3rd step which is the last step is concluding sentence or closing sentence.
What is the closing sentence? The closing sentence is the last sentence in a
paragraph. What does it do? It restates the main idea of your paragraph. How do
I write one? Restate the main idea of the paragraph using different words. Example:
There
are three reasons why Canada is one of the best countries in the world. First,
Canada has an excellent health care system. All Canadians have access to
medical services at a reasonable price. Second, Canada has a high standard of
education. Students are taught by well-trained teachers and are encouraged to
continue studying at university. Finally, Canada's cities are clean and
efficiently managed. Canadian cities have many parks and lots of space for
people to live. As a result, Canada is a
desirable place to live.
I
bold each example to show the example of each sentence.
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